Narrative Rough Cut

After our latest team meeting we decided to film the narrative for the video, This is our first narrative rough cut filmed in the libary at college. This is where Cherrie and her love interest meet for the first time and she starts to follow him. Overall we like the pace of the editing and the quality of the shots, we think it will compliment our video perfectly. however the group feel like the last few seconds worth of clips are too 'dragged out' and dont reflet the pace of the song. and so further editing will be needed to ensure we match the pace of the song; we will play around with the studio close-ups ect to add to the pace.