Rough Cut 2

Above is the second rough cut from the post-production, which includes our new narrative footage and improvements we mentioned from our last video.

Alongside the narrative, We have fixed the problems with our clock, spending more time on Photoshop editing a serrate clock video to give it a better flow. We have also fixed the introduction title slides which originally were added temporarily; we worked on Photoshop producing separate titles with different levels of drop-shadow and effects to give a neon-flashing effect when added to the video.

We have also added additional scenes into the video, such as the purple backdrop and the black and white-striped backdrop.

Areas for improvement:

1. Add the new shoe-stamping introduction.
2. Continue editing the footage to fit more to the beat.
3. Fix problems with the clock.
4. Add more narrative (bridge "boy come to me").
5. Fix problems with gap at bottom of studio-shot footage.